六级英语作文范文

导语：如何才能写好一篇六级英语作文，这就需要搜集整理更多的资料和文献，欢迎阅读由公务员之家整理的十篇范文，供你借鉴。

篇1

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

翻译：可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

2、So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 句子（如此……以至于……）

例句：So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

翻译：时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

3、Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）

篇2

1. 目前许多人扔垃圾时不分类

2. 由此带来的问题

3. 提倡垃圾分类的意义

Waste Sorting

Most people haven’t formed the habit of and committed themselves to waste sorting now in China. They would throw their domestic garbage — kitchen refuse, abandoned plastics and papers，broken china and glass, etc. — all into the same public containers, without"thinking whether they are recyclable or not.

篇3

关键词： 独立学院 四、六级作文 错误和问题分析

大学英语写作是衡量学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个重要的考查指标，也是大学英语四、六级考试的一个重要内容。教育部高等教育司发行的大学英语课程教学要求就书面表达（一般要求）明确要求学生“能完成一般性的写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯，能掌握基本的写作技巧”。由于大纲明确地规定了时间和篇幅，这就要求学生能紧扣所给的题目主题，写出言简意赅、逻辑性强、语言规范的文章。然而大部分学生在四、六级考场感到非常棘手，加上情绪紧张，往往造成思路不清晰，字迹潦草，乱涂乱改，以致失分严重。大学英语四、六级改革后的新题型，写作占了总分710分的15％，也就是说写作的满分是106.5分。笔者曾分析长江大学文理学院的06级大学英语考生四级考试的总分数和写作分数之间的关系，发现基本上写作分数在80分左右的学生，总分大部分在425分以上，也就通过了四级考试，而大部分没有通过考试的学生写作分数偏低。因此，写好作文对于参加大学英语四、六级考试的学生来说至关重要，不容忽视。

笔者结合教学过程中对学生习作的批改经验，总结出影响学生作文成绩的几个原因。以学生2008年3月份的习作题目“Holding Olympic Games：a Business Activity or a Sports Ceremony?”为例，提纲如下：有的人认为召开奥林匹克运动会已经成为了一种商业行为，而不再是单纯的体育盛会；有的人认为奥林匹克运动会仍然是全世界的体育盛会，奥林匹克精神得到了传承与弘扬，阐述你的观点和看法。笔者具体分析了学生在写作方面的薄弱环节，具体如下：

通过对学生上交的习作进行详细分析，总结出学生在写作过程中主要存在如下几个薄弱环节。

一、没有四、六级作文的框架意识和主题意识

无视标题和提纲，随心所欲地写出一段或是多于三段的文章。有的学生洋洋洒洒地写出五六段两三百字的文章，可是很多的语言和段落与主题无关。譬如有些学生用大量的篇幅描述奥运会的起源和历史，有的介绍29届北京奥运会的口号“New Beijing，Great Olympics”，以及中国政府承诺举办一届高科技有特色的奥运会和所做的努力，有的还介绍了北京正在为第29届奥运会做哪些整备工作以及进展的状况等。因此，我们在训练学生写作时，一定要强调学生要抓住主题，选择最紧扣主题的信息材料和语言，以最合乎逻辑的方式安排层次和结构，让学生在正式下笔之前，拟好提纲，整理思路，使自己的文章结构环环相扣，层次分明。

二、英语语法基础薄弱，出现重大的语法错误

这里所说的重大语法错误包括时态、语态的混用，主谓不一致，单词词性混用，以及用词不当等。例如：

1.The 29th period Olympic Games will hold in Beijing，China.

2.The Olympic Games has many sport items，such as run，jump，swim and so on.

3.Actually，the Olympic Games is derived from the old Greece.

4.I am afraid that the Olympic spirits will dead.I don’t want this day come true one day.

5.Host a high-level Games is the solemn promise that the Chinese government and people make.

6.The five rings in five colors represent the five continents of the world join in friendship.

以上都是学生习作的原句，暴露了学生的不同的语法缺陷。例句1，3是典型的语态的混用，hold应改为be held；is derived from应改为derive from。例句2，4，5混用单词词性，没有考虑句子结构。run，jump swim应该改为动名词running，jumping，swimming；形容词dead应该改为动词词组die out作谓语；host应改为hosting，构成名词短语作主语。例2中还出现了时态和语态的双重错误，主谓不一致，以及用词不当，has应改为have been set up。例句5还出现了时态的错误，make应改为made。例句3还出现了用词不当，old应改为ancient。例句6 join in应改为joined in，构成过去分词短语作后置定语。

很明显，这些错误会严重影响得分。我们知道大学英语四六级作文的评分原则是总体评分，就文章总体印象给分。学生如果犯严重的语言错误，势必给评卷教师很不好的印象，得分就自然而然低。因此在大学英语教学中，强调基础的语法知识是必要的。学生只有掌握基本的语法，才能写出正确的句子，从而写出通顺的文章。

三、句式简单缺乏变化，上下文连接不紧凑，表达方式不地道

在批改学生的习作时，笔者发现有些学生的作文句式表达正确，符合语法规范，思路也清晰，但整个文章很枯燥，缺乏生动性。造成此种现象的原因在于句式和用词太过呆板，过于重复，上下文无衔接过渡词汇，没有承上启下之笔。很多学生在整篇文章中表达个人的观点时，都是重复多次以第一/三人称为主语的单一句式出现，譬如“I/they think...”，“I/they believe...”，“I should should do...”，“I/they must do...”。再比如表示转折意思和因果关系时，不少学生总是不厌其烦地用“but”和“so”。适当的句式变化和用词生动可以使文章润色。所以，在教学过程中，可以给学生归纳一些常用的表达方式，并且要求学生强化记忆，以便让学生做“有米之炊”。例如：

1.表达自己观点的模式

From my standpoint（viewpoint，point of view），Personally（frankly）speaking，in my opinion，As far as I am concerned，It can be said with certainty that，I am sure that，I am convinced that，It can be easily proved that，It must be admitted that，It is essential（imperative，indispensable，necessary，important）for us to do...，I am firmly opposed to，I think otherwise，I don’t think so，I disagree，I have every reason to say that，It certainly won’t be right to say that，etc.

2.表达别人的观点

In the view of other people，Some people tend（incline）to believe that，They point out（argue，claim，insist，assert，declare）that，Other people still hold the view that，etc.

3.表达普通或共同的观点

The most widely-held view is，It is generally（universally）thought（believed，considered，acknowledged，recognized，agreed）that，The great majority of the people share the same idea，We are of the same mind，I am of their mind，I can’t agree more，I absolutely（entirely，totally，utterly）agree with them，Generally speaking，etc.

4.因果过渡词

thus，therefore，hence，accordingly，consequently，in view of，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to，on account of，for this reason，for this purpose，on that account，as a result of，in this（that）case，result in，result from，by the reason that，that is why，etc.

5.意思转折过渡词

however，while，whereas，nevertheless，anyhow，anyway，otherwise，instead（of），rather than，in any case，at any rate，no matter how（what，when），even so，in spite of，despite，even though，even if，opposite to，on the contrary，etc.

四、没有四、六级作文的内容意识和亮点意识，缺乏新颖性和创造性

相当一部分学生在作文当中所表现出对事物的认识水平和阅历见解与其年龄和文化程度不相称，写出的作文着眼点低、视野狭窄。最主要的问题是，作文中缺乏事例和数据，经常是大篇幅的说理，内容空洞无味。另外，笔者发现少数学生背诵和掌握了不少的作文模板，语言也比较流畅，思路清晰，文章的结构有条有理，可是缺乏自己独到的见解，没有闪光点和亮点。仍然以上述习作为例，有些学生在第一二段中分析得有条有理，语言也很流畅。可是，在第三段阐述自己的观点时，只是轻描淡写地同意了第一种观点，认为人们把召开奥运会当作一种商业行为，失去了奥林匹克的精神和意义，没有阐述任何理由，也没有新颖或说服力强的例证，就草草结束行文，给人“神龙见首不见尾”之感，不免使文章黯然失色。

以上是笔者多年来通过对学生的四、六级作文进行综合分析总结出的在四、六级作文中普遍存在的问题。希望通过对这些问题的分析，可以帮助学生提高英语写作水平，同时对大学英语教学有一定的指导意义。

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篇4

on new year’s eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. there are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. after dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. we have a wonderful evening on new year’s eve.

on the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. after breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. on the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

春节是中国的传统节日。我们也称它为春节。它是在农历1月1日。

在新年前夕,所有人围坐在桌子上,有一个大的家庭晚餐。有一些蔬菜,一些鱼,一些肉,一些水果和一些喝果汁、可口可乐、百事可乐和一些不错的葡萄酒。总的来说,这是一个很好的和美味的晚餐。晚饭后,我们总是看电视节目。我们有一个美好的晚上在新年前夕。

篇5

I had a cat six years ago . It was black . So I called him Old Black . It liked catching mice .When it caught the mice, it was so brave ! It also liked eating fish . When it ate something, it always shook its head , how lovely !

Every time when I went home, Old Black alaways came to the door to welcome me . It always lop my feet gently , and it made me very comfortable .

Now Old Black isn’t with me . It was sent to one of my relatives by my parents . I was very sad . But I always miss him . Old Black is my best friend and I like him forever .

篇6

Tomorrow is mother's day once a year, every year in the second week of May. Now remember that mother is so selfless. She always wanted the best thing for us, she would prefer to work rather bitter child, she is in the future for children to do, there is such a selfless man?

妈妈总在我困难时带来帮助，总在我伤心时带给安慰，总是无私奉献而不求回报。如果让我用一个词来形容母亲那我会说：“无私奉献，不求回报。”所以以后在跟妈妈争执时一定要多多体谅妈妈，不要让她们很伤心。

My mother always when I am in trouble to bring help, always when I'm sad to comfort, always selfless dedication and ask for nothing in return. If I use a word to describe my mother that I would say: "selfless dedication, asking nothing in return." So after the dispute with her mother must be more sympathetic to the mother, don't let them very sad.

有几次，我特不注意卫生，只赶时间。后来妈妈在后面一直帮我收拾，当我想起来，总很感谢她。妈妈谢谢您，是您无私的哺育了我，谢谢!

There are several times, I do not pay attention to health, only time. Later, the mother behind always helped me up, when I think of it, always very grateful to her. Thank you for your mother, your selfless nurtured me, thank you!

以后祝您一帆风顺，万事如意!

篇7

Fresh people were jubilant. Shopping came in an endless stream, some are buying New Year pictures, some are buying necessities and some sit around the stove fire box to watch TV, there are people playing mahjong playing poker, and so on.

Anyway, the street colourful, all kinds of people, a full range of variety of goods, full of beautiful things in eyes, I'm afraid people want to buy what all difficult to choose!

Lights before the Spring Festival, every family, every family dressed house having a unique style, each have each personality. They put to buy necessities to all over the floor. Bought New Year paintings how stick method, then each have their own style and preferences. Some dish, some backwards, and the crooked stick, each has his strong point. People buy vegetables all fixed, such as the Spring Festival comes, only can be a festival. Families with firecrackers, people wear new clothes, preparing New Year, before the Spring Festival, people go out, if met good friends, always mouth don't forget to say: "the streets!"

People kill pig to kill sheep, busily preparing for the Spring Festival belly-worship.

The Spring Festival, the children will get up early, to mom and dad's room, the traditional New Year ceremony. The children of parents said some lucky though, my parents brought out New Year's money, let the children happily. Everybody hope this year to luck, a thriving business.

Some friends and family together, taste the wine, talked some happy message. And the most happy is, we can take off to save money, and then happy running up the street to buy a lot of fun things, such as cars, buggies, toy guns, football, etc., and as long as our mouth sweet a bit, say more blessed penis, that can make a lot of money!

People have been playing late into the night, his mouth eating delicious fruit, setting off firecrackers fireworks in his hand... Adult children singing and dancing, potter to play with!

盼啊!盼啊，眼看春节就快到了，想到这，我不由得笑了起来，在春节前，

人们个个喜气洋洋，个个精神饱满。逛街的人络绎不绝，有的在买年画，有的在买年货，有的坐着火箱围着火炉看电视，还有的人在打麻将打扑克，等等不一而足。

反正街上五彩缤纷，各种各样的人都有，各种各样的货物都齐全，琳琅满目，人们恐怕想买什么都难选择!

春节前，家家户户都灯火通明，家家都把房子打扮得别具一格，各有各的个性。他们把买来的年货放得满地都地。买来的年画怎么贴法，那就各有自己的风格和喜好了。有的正着贴，有的倒着贴，还有的歪着贴，各有千秋。人们把买来的菜全部都弄好了，只等春节一到，就可一饱口福了。家家备有鞭炮，人们穿上新衣服，准备迎新年，在春节前，人们一出门，如果遇上了好朋友，总是口中不忘说一句：“上街啊!”

人们杀猪宰羊，忙碌地准备着春节大吃大喝一番。

春节到了，小朋友们便早早起床，来到爸爸妈妈的房间，开始了传统的拜年仪式了。小朋友们对父母说着一些吉祥话儿，爸妈就拿出压岁钱，让小孩子们高高兴兴。大家都希望今年能够吉祥如意，招财进宝。

篇8

Friendship this lock, lock me with another person together, care about each other, help each other.

Friendship, it is like the red sun, lighting up our growth path; It is like sweet dew, thirst for us; It is like the flash, the brightest star, every night, always silently bless us in heaven.

Friendship, high-sounding name! It with our growth, accompanies us to play... Friendship is priceless, how much money can not buy back.

Who cannot leave the friendship, cherish!

友谊，是把锁，把两个人紧紧锁在一起;友谊，是颗糖，让两个人尝到快乐的滋味：友谊，是无价的，每个人都需要它。

友谊这把锁，把我和另外一个人锁在一起，彼此关心，彼此帮助。

友谊，它像火红的太阳，照亮了我们成长的路线;它像甘甜的露水，为我们解渴;它又像最闪最亮的星星，每到黑夜，总在天上默默祝福着我们。

篇9

Today following with economy ， Science and technology‘s devolop , we human are destorying the environment.

But we must know we have only a world ,if it's broken we haven't any places to live. So we can't leave it along,we should do something to stop it.

To make it ,we should do anything from ourselves ,such as not waste water or electic power etc.

Besides it we should persuade people joining us as more as posible.

If every one can do this our world will be more beatiful and tomorrow is another day.

【参考译文】

今天，随着经济、科技的发展，人类破坏环境。

但我们必须知道我们只有一个世界，如果它破碎了，我们就没有生存的地方。所以我们不能离开它，我们应该做些什么来阻止它。

要做到这一点，我们应该从自己做的任何事情，如不浪费水、电等。

篇10

我的爱好英语作文一：

I am Bob. I am 11 years old. I live in a tall building. It has twenty-nine floors. I live on the twenty-first floor. I am from China. I have small eyes. My favourite food is chicken. My favourite animal is dog，because it is lovely.

My best friend is Ted. We often play together. But his house is very far from my house. He likes playing computer games. My hobby is playing football. I often play football with my classmates, because they like playing football, too. We often win. Why do I like football? Because it does a lot of good for my body. Do you like football?

我的爱好英语作文二：

My hobby is lisetening to music.

I like listening to music best.Because listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well

I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever.

我的爱好英语作文三：